Excellent episode Time and 2 Player. Please keep the puzzles in the game. There's only a few kind of puzzles that I hate. I hate it when you've clicked on an object and you get no reaction to it and then later in the game, clicking on it will cause a reaction. If an object is now suddenly important, give some visual or verbal indication that it's somehow different. I don't want to have to click on every object after every event in a game.
I also hate it when you have multiple items in your inventory that should be able to serve the same function, but won't. Like when you have a cup, a bowl, and a bottle. But only the bottle will hold water. Why can't I fill up the bowl or cup with water? Please avoid those sorts of situations.
I think that the most important part of a game is the characters. With the story coming in a close second. When I think about games that I'm nostalgic about, I always think about the characters and story the most. These are the things that make us care about the game.
I loved your random jokes in the beginning about the game being about chinchillas, super violence, nudity, and a snuff game. Please include your twisted sense of humor in the game.
I'm really excited about your concept of having 2 main characters being from 2 different worlds. Sci fi vs fantasy. Men vs. women. Why not take it one step further and have the sci-fi world have just men in it. And the fantasy world will only have women in it. Each world has never seen the other gender. The males create offspring via science: cloning. And the females create offspring with magic. When the main characters meet, they'll each think that the other one is an alien. Of course, I'm blatantly ripping off the plot of the anime Vandread.
Keep up the good work.